How is this poem so far?

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there a forces beyond one’s plans
splitting mind’s to not understand
as natures feels quite the appeal
to be indifferent and full of fear

indifferent to the point of no meaning
nature without intention and feeling
no plan for how we will go about
humans only believe to rid of doubt

making life an individual’s castle
that is pointless and full of hassle
leaving death and birth continuations
of what is a continuing damnation
 
without reading your poem.
Poetry is not good or bad.
Your opinion is the only won that counts.
And also. Heroic couuplets are a thing of the past. If you want true feeling. Go for Free verse or another more fun form of poerty.
 
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