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We're going to teach you all about the stars origins and evolution
There are many steps that are important and have a contribution

In the nebulas the material contracts and breaks down
Gravity pulls in the gas and dust that is left around

If enough of the dust and gas is collected
then the core will go hot , 10 million degrees celsius is expected

The star begins to glow and the leftover gas and dust circulates
From the core all the elctromagnetic waves radiate

Now we're going to tell you about the evolution of stars

Which doesn't not include telling you anything about mars

There are three main paths for stars, low mass is the first
They start small, exist as dim red dwarfs and burn their hydrogen gas very slowly
They eventually expand into red giants but don't get at all holey

Intermediate burns hydrogen faster, lasts for a shorter time span and collapses on itself
It ends up forming a white dwarf then to a black dwaf

High mass is twelve times the mass of our sun
They consume their fuel fastest and grow rapidly faster than you can run
They grow into red giants with a life span of the shortest of the three

Thank you for listening to us teach you about the stars origions and evolution

We know we took up your time by only a small fraction
 
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