How is this for an opening for a horror novel?

Blood trickled down my leg as I examined my wounds.
“Dude, this gravel can really tear up your skin!” I exclaimed to my friends who already jumped the fence, without wounds.
“Yeah? Well, maybe you shouldn’t wear shorts when we come here.” John said as he looked at my cut. “Now come on! We better get going before someone catches us.”, he said as he walked away. We hurried after him.
“ So, where to today?” Blake asks, even though he already is aware of our answers.
“ The sand dunes!” We all shouted. After our commotion, we headed off, away from the barbed-wired fence.

Just tell me if this makes you want to read on ! ! =)
 
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