HOW IS MY POEM? Is it good? Poetry?

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I am 16. I have maaaaaany more like this one.

Will I ever amount to anything,
Am I another to be gone by the sound of a bang,
Is there anything in life set out for me,
Or is the writing on the wall not to be seen?

I no longer have this love for you,
I am sure it has ended for you, too.
My dreams have left you in the night,
Because if they hadn't, I would have to end my life.
have you never read a poem before? get an education
 
This is sad! And that you have more shows that this isn't just a phase!!!

It's a good poem! But the top part talks about you, and the 2nd part talks about her. And the last line?? Wayyyyyy odd.

GEt help if you need it!!
 
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