How is my poem for beginners?!?

[T-BiRd FaN]

Hi I was wondering if you could tell me how my poem is? This is my third poem that is longer than one stanza. Thanks!

If I was to fall asleep
and have a never ending dream,
would you look at my body and weep?

Why so sad?
Smile that beautiful smile, please?
I liked it when you smiled and were glad.

I should be the one upset
because I never got to tell you
how glad I was we met.

I never got to tell you
how much I cared
and how special you were too.

To summarize this,
I never got to tell you I love you,
and how much I'm going to miss you.

I wrote this very late and I hope it's decent. Please make suggestions, etc. but please don't be to hard. Thanks!
P.S. If you could think of a title for the poem that would be great. I was thinking "You" but I don't know for sure.

 

[Danny Rose]

One thing to think about when writing poetry (especially if it's a love poem):

What makes my poem different from the others?

 

[❤Bunny ❤Wolffie ❤]

I think it is pretty good, just your third.

for a beginner you have nice flow, I like the punctuation.

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