how is my poem coming out so far.?

Nikki Williams

New member
any criticism is helpful thanks.


"the day you slipped away"

going back to the church i remember walking up the aisle
looking at all the people & placing a rose on the pile
many young faces came to say goodbye they take one look up
then turn to cry
bonnie lies before all resting peacefully
i stand before her and pray she will rest blissfully
 
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