How is my Haiku Poem ?

Ashley Paulison

New member
White Mountans:

Pure, white , beautiful
Mountains towerng above
Nothing else compairs .


Im not sure if it sounds just right & I need your opinion ! (:

If you have any ideas of what some words could be changed to , that would be great !
Sorry about the miss spellings , I was in a slight rush . (: Thank you though . (:
 
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