How does this work for a 40's detective yarn (2nd episode)?

Bear

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It was a cold, snowy, rainy, afternoon. I was in my office when I heard the outer door open and close.
The dame came in like a whirlwind, tried to bully her way past my girl Friday and into my inner sanctum.
My girl friday (her name is actually Tuesday) ran interferance and stopped the dame short. Tuesday asked the dame what was up. The dame said she needed to see me about a personal problem. Tuesday asked "What the problem was". The dame answered that it was of a financial nature and was willing to pay double the rate for my services. Tuesday said she'd take a name and number and I'd be in touch as I was out of the office for several days.
Stay tuned for episode 3
 
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