How does this sound? Lyrics/poem?

Lilpinksock_

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I love it when she smiles and laughs
But I'm always there for the tears and turmoil.

Or for the ending instead of turmoil, sadness? This just came to my mind today and I think I want to add more to it. But I don't know because I've never really wrote poems, so what do you think?
Thaanks!
And what about this?
The sun shines down on her glorious face
Rain and bleakness drown out the hapiness
As she runs from all of her troubles
Just keep running
Running away
 
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