How does this sound? Any suggestions?

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The debate on whether middle schoolers should inforce uniforms is eons old. Based upon personal expierence, I believe students should not be forced to wear uniforms. Clothing restrictions eradicate the diversity and our individuality as humans and limits our creativity as teenagers. As stated by Rchard Felch, in his speech 'School Uniforms: Suspension or Repression?', school uniforms can not solvethe nation's ongoing gang problems nor the less pressing issues of cliques. Furthermore, mandating this policy to elementary, middle school, junior high or even high school students will only nullify our rights to express ourselces and our ever-fluctuating styles.

~how does that sound? i have to write a paper on school uniforms. im open to new ideas and any editing u think i should make! thanks!
 
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