How does this sonnet sound?

Julia Walton

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I want HONEST reflections :)

Was in a search for those missing pieces
The few I had found were not the right fit
I'm worried, as the number decreases
Did not seem to fall into benefit?

Then, the day I saw you, my life had changed
Being with you, I could not be more blessed
These feelings were finally rearranged
It's, now, this new love is truly confessed

I cannot go on without you, I've tried
Even when no one seems to slightly care
You are always the one who's by my side
Carrying the weight, I can hardly bare

I've searched; I've found; and could not live without
You are the one, and free from any doubts.
 
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