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essay is: Obesity-parents to blame? First I did a for para after the introduction and after this I wrote:
However, most obese people started as emotional eaters and unfortunently in some cases grew into an addiction. Whether it was bullying or a family death they experienced they turned to food, mentally beliveing it would comfort them.These tragic events have happened to almost everyone in the world .......... I dont know what to write now - This essay is at a higher level (a level)
what other points for/against could i use and how can i increase my mark higher
However, most obese people started as emotional eaters and unfortunently in some cases grew into an addiction. Whether it was bullying or a family death they experienced they turned to food, mentally beliveing it would comfort them.These tragic events have happened to almost everyone in the world .......... I dont know what to write now - This essay is at a higher level (a level)
what other points for/against could i use and how can i increase my mark higher