Okay, I have made two bands, my Post-Hardcore band is "AnAugustHeartbreak" And my Emocore-Screamo band is "MyBrokenWings" I will be writing and screaming the lyrics, and I think im an okay writer all ready, but I need some expert advice on how to write lyrics for both types of these genres. I am influenced by: Escape the Fate/ BlesstheFall/ A Skylit Drive/ Alesana/ Pierce The Veil/ Bring Me the Horizon/ Saosin. To give you a taste of what we are like. And now i will give an an example of my lyric writing skills:
"Look Past The Scars'' The first song I ever wrote
This ain't a war, It's rapture.
To oblitirate all, All the non-Believers.
(Scream)
I'll look in your eyes!
And I'll find!
Peace!
But only after I fall!
To pieces!
(Normal Voice)
You look in the mirror at yourself,
See the bruises he inflicted on you.
You say "It was probly and an accident."
"Nothing was meant."
(Scream)
"By it!"
(Normal Voice) Chorus
You have no voice,
After all the screaming.
Your life is void,
And it's deepining.
But it's not okay,
It'll happen again.
So be ready for that day,
That day is the end.
(Scream)
Be ready for the marks,
To be left on your face.
But you say you love him so,
You won't leave that place.
(Normal Voice)
You won't make it,
Through the night.
You might wake,
With a fright.
But you'll think he's just,
Trying to help you,
But little do you know,
You're actually helpless.
Chorus
(Scream)
Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
(Normal Voice)
You say you will,
Leave him and forget.
You take a pill,
And you forget.
So sit still,
And remember.
(Scream)
You made so many mistakes!
But it's okay!
It's okay! x3
I'll save you! x2
Chorus
So based on all of that, please tell me advice
"Look Past The Scars'' The first song I ever wrote
This ain't a war, It's rapture.
To oblitirate all, All the non-Believers.
(Scream)
I'll look in your eyes!
And I'll find!
Peace!
But only after I fall!
To pieces!
(Normal Voice)
You look in the mirror at yourself,
See the bruises he inflicted on you.
You say "It was probly and an accident."
"Nothing was meant."
(Scream)
"By it!"
(Normal Voice) Chorus
You have no voice,
After all the screaming.
Your life is void,
And it's deepining.
But it's not okay,
It'll happen again.
So be ready for that day,
That day is the end.
(Scream)
Be ready for the marks,
To be left on your face.
But you say you love him so,
You won't leave that place.
(Normal Voice)
You won't make it,
Through the night.
You might wake,
With a fright.
But you'll think he's just,
Trying to help you,
But little do you know,
You're actually helpless.
Chorus
(Scream)
Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
(Normal Voice)
You say you will,
Leave him and forget.
You take a pill,
And you forget.
So sit still,
And remember.
(Scream)
You made so many mistakes!
But it's okay!
It's okay! x3
I'll save you! x2
Chorus
So based on all of that, please tell me advice