How do you like the lyrics to my song?

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Okay so I just finished this song, it isn't 100% complete tho, because I haven't really edited all of it yet, but just tell me what you think of it and how you like it, also anything that I need to change okay? It's called Outside your Chevy
Just moved in, I unpacked my things
Deep in a box there was picture with me
With You in the background in your Chevy truck
It was the moment my life changed it was the moment that stuck
Always and forever I’ll still recall
That four-door pickup Chevy that changed it all
We’d plow through the wheat fields burning up the night
Eat on the tailgate and watch the fireflies
I took that picture and held it close to my heart
Always remembering back to the start

‘Cause it was a Sunday and your eyes were shining
You said forever and I knew you weren’t lying
The sun was gleaming in through the window
This picture perfect moment that captured the wind blow
Outside your Chevy it was a different world
Yeah outside your Chevy I wasn’t your girl

And you turned up the radio and on came our song
The one by George Strait we’d wait for all night long
We’d watch the warm sunset
And talk about regrets
But one thing we didn’t
One thing that isn’t
On a list of remorse
Is that Chevy four door

‘Cause it was a Sunday and your eyes were shining
You said forever and I knew you weren’t lying
The sun was gleaming in through the window
This picture perfect moment that captured the wind blow
Outside your Chevy it was a different world
Yeah outside your Chevy I was wasn’t your girl

But you still held me closer when the pain would kick in
I just want you to lock the doors so we can replay it all again

Yeah it was a Sunday and your eyes were shining
You said forever and I thought you weren’t lying
The sun was gleaming in through the window
This picture perfect moment that captured the wind blow
And you never told me that forever means till summers gone
You never told that yeah you could move on
Outside your Chevy it was a different world
Yeah Outside your Chevy I wasn’t your girl

I opened the door into this world
Tried to enjoy it more, but I still wasn’t your girl

~Thanxoxo
 
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