How do you like my poem?

redduke

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My niece just died, my parents got divorced, and my dad has cancer, so please forgive me if it's a bit depressing. Please rate it on a scale from 1-10!!! Thanks!!!



Watch my tears just wash away,
All the grief and all the sorrow,
All these pains from yesterday,
Help me see the bright tomorrow.

Watch my tears just flow and tide,
That they both just walked apart,
I wish that yesterday had lied,
An ushered up my flowing heart,

Watch my tears make lines of red,
As they glisten in timeless stay,
My mind of happiness now is dead,
I remember yesterday,

Watch my tears drop to the floor,
Feel my guilt burning inside,
The only way out is through my souls door,
But to mortal love I am tied,

Watch my tears dry on pale cheeks,
See the knife slip from my decay,
My cold lips you kissed will never speak,
I've forgot about yesterday.




Thanks!!!!!!
 
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