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redduke

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LOVE YOU MY LOVE

Dream love dream,
And never forget me,
As your wrapped in sleep,
My love I am your key,

I'm your key to our hearts,
I'm your key to our love,
I'm a key to all wonders,
To the blue skies above,

The skies can be cloudy,
Of raining and thunder,
But I'm still your key,
To that blue sky wonder,

Our hearts can be icy,
Our words can be tart,
But I am the key,
To the love in our hearts,

The wonders can live,
In large locked chests,
But I am your key,
To see all the best,

Dream love dream,
I'm watching you,
I'll lay down here,
So I can dream too.
 
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