How do you like my poem? "ice grip" please read?

Beth

New member
Ice grip*

I have a thin
Ice grip onto
Reality*
It's melting,*
Melting fast*
While I'm falling
Fallin hard.

For I've Been left
Far to many times
Making me turn ice cold
And that's all I have left
Buts it's melting*
For once and for all

Now I have tears pooring out of my eyes
Like a rain storm*
And slicing my skin*
Like twalens of a hawk
Destroying what's left of me
For I don't want my knightmare*
To become real, once again. *
 
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