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Pumpkin

New member
correct? Thank you!? Dear ________,

All of my compliments and personal congratulations for your appointment as the head of our institution for Caribbean.Our mutual friend, ________, informed me of the news and gave me your contact for the continuation of our activities. If you remember that in Haiti, I was starting up a project for the teaching and education of human rights. This project has become a reality since September 2007. I started to materialize the project but it must advance. Therefore, I am submitting the project to GLO, but given the reorganization of the institution, Nana suggested to me to submit the project to you so that other projects in relation with the activities of the Institute and the Foundation pending at GLO. I am submitting to you the primary project for the destination at GLO whose realization may help us advance the project seriously. We hope for funding for this purpose.
 
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