How Can I Write About An Incubus (Sex Demon) Without It Getting Too Sexual? - Idea -?

♥_nicole

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:| I'm stuck. I have this real fascination with both the Incubus (male sex demon) and Succubus (female sex demon), and I got the urge the other day to write about an Incubus.

Most visit humans when they sleep so that they can either seduce them and have sex with them, and most of the time make them pregnant (or the other way around for a Succubus), and I wanted them in my story to have some sort of ability to sway people to think what they want them to think -- have sex with them and then forget --.

Would it be too cliche if I had a really impulsive and stubborn Incubus attempt to seduce this girl, but fails for the first time. He gets determined to get into bed with her, so he takes human form and pretends to be a student there. Although he doesn't have complete control over her, there's still some of his will that leaks through so she's unwillingly drawn to talking to him. Eventually, he becomes obsessed with achieving his goal and finding out how or why she can resist him. I'll figure out something that she is, but I obviously wanted them to fall in love. But I was also thinking of throwing his sister in there (a Succubus) that thinks he's spending too much time on this human and needs to hurry up and throwing her to the curb already, so she also attempts to seduce her away from her brother.

Sorry about it being so long. So, is that too cliche? It's just something I quickly wrote down, but I would love some suggestions. I obviously wouldn't use them, I just need something to get my creativeness flowing... help? And do you think it's kind of impossible to make a story on an Incubus and/or Succubus not sexual? Thanks in advance ;\

~Nicole.xx
 
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