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The tv advert begins with a mid-shot of Alexandr introducing himself. He is filmed in a large antique-styled room, with the fireplace lit in the background, giving it a warm or homely atmosphere. He is wearing a robe, similar the celebrity Hugh Hefner, which would suggest he that the Meerkat is posh or rich.
 
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