Okay well the following show two evaluations I have wrote for two pages of my magazine I produced. Please could someone help me to add more to each, basically it's a music magazine, the two pages being analysed are a interview of a 'famous person' page and the contents page, thank you 
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Interview.
1.Title of page – the title of the page is to add more colour to the page and also so it’s grabs the attention of the target audience.
2.Pictures – the picture’s are to show who the page was about and shows more meaning the text.
3.Text – the text is about the person being interviewed, this is what the target audience want to know about.
4.Page Number – the page number is to show reference to the contents page and to make it easier for the reader to find the page it wants.
5.Interviewer name – the interviewer name is just to show the reader who interviewed the band/person and also to give credit to the interviwer.
Contents
1.Pictures – the pictures of the contents page is to show reference on what main stories there are and which page number it goes with. Also it shows the audience what things they should look at.
2.Number of page– the number of the pages are to show authenticity to the magazine contents page and also to show what pages are where.
3.Title – the title of the page is to show what the page is about.
4.Date – the date is to show authenticity and also to show how recent the magazine is to the target audience.
5.Content of magazine text – the content text is to show the other pages, which aren’t the main stories but good headlines, so that the reader gets the full value of money out of the magazine.
xxInterview.
1.Title of page – the title of the page is to add more colour to the page and also so it’s grabs the attention of the target audience.
2.Pictures – the picture’s are to show who the page was about and shows more meaning the text.
3.Text – the text is about the person being interviewed, this is what the target audience want to know about.
4.Page Number – the page number is to show reference to the contents page and to make it easier for the reader to find the page it wants.
5.Interviewer name – the interviewer name is just to show the reader who interviewed the band/person and also to give credit to the interviwer.
Contents
1.Pictures – the pictures of the contents page is to show reference on what main stories there are and which page number it goes with. Also it shows the audience what things they should look at.
2.Number of page– the number of the pages are to show authenticity to the magazine contents page and also to show what pages are where.
3.Title – the title of the page is to show what the page is about.
4.Date – the date is to show authenticity and also to show how recent the magazine is to the target audience.
5.Content of magazine text – the content text is to show the other pages, which aren’t the main stories but good headlines, so that the reader gets the full value of money out of the magazine.