Alexgalexy
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Well im trying to do some poems (im 12) by myself and i want to see if the one i did is good and if u may please give me some pointers and tips and if anyone can fix this poem to make it whole then thats appreciated.
You know im there for you,
if it means to kill or maim the world for you,
but why have you left me,
when i traveled the world for thee
I did not believe,
a girl like you would do something,
I may have thought i was deceived.
O, why in this world,
should we lose the one to love,
the one we thought high above.
The love you've shown,
just before the time of mourn,
wither it may be,
just as how my heart felt without thee.
You know im there for you,
if it means to kill or maim the world for you,
but why have you left me,
when i traveled the world for thee
I did not believe,
a girl like you would do something,
I may have thought i was deceived.
O, why in this world,
should we lose the one to love,
the one we thought high above.
The love you've shown,
just before the time of mourn,
wither it may be,
just as how my heart felt without thee.