How about I quit whining and start writing poems?

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I am dirt
I am the clay
I have cried at the moon
I don't think it cared
I am old
I have nothing to say
You are surprised?
You believe in wisdom?
Me too but,
I never found it
I am the clay
The potter rejected
I am the dirt beneath the boots of angels


On second thought a better poem would be simply:

Angels
With boots on
 
lol hmm i guess i like the first one better :)

but actually, i do really like the first one. its different, its abstract, its creative and it evokes a nice sort of picture and feeling.

but the reader's digest condensed version should be, like, a T-shrit or something. "Angels.... with boots on!"
 
It looks more like some writing rather than poetry..

But what on earth does angels with boots on mean? :S
 
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