Honestly, is this a good poem?

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Follow and Believe
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I am a follower and a believer
I wonder where life will take me
I hear people cry
I see people suffer
I want to help them have a better life
I am a follower and a believer

I pretend that I have the power to heal hearts
I feel sorry for people who have nothing to look forward to
I touch the lives of my friends
I worry for the poor and sick
I cry because I can not help them
I am a follower and a believer

I understand that there are people who are less fortunate than I
I say that I have faith they will find God
I dream that the poor become rich and the suffering recover
I try to imagine a perfect world
I hope one day everyone may find peace
I am a follower and a believer

My friends and my teacher keep on telling me that it is a really good poem, but I just don't see it...

PS It is also being submitted to the Young Writers Contest.

Thanks in advance!
 
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