Honest opinion about my writing please?

[Novel Poem]

I've started a blog posting flash fiction that I write! I am planning to write a novel in the near future and I haven't been getting that much feedback! I've been getting a lot of views but not many are commenting and my family says I'm good but they're family and I donno if telling me the truth! I need some honest opinion and if you happen to be a writer I would appreciate your time looking over my work!!
Thank you all for your time
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