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doing a essay plan for the causes of the first world war.

this is my introduction:

In Europe 1914, the Archduke had been assassinated. This was one of the short term causes. One of the long term causes were the triple alliance and the triple entente. In this essay I will talk about the long and short term causes and also I will show whether or not the first world war would have happened if the archduke was murdered or not.

and for ma second paragraph i am abit stuck. it says to talk about the long term causes which i know about but i don't know how to write them. this is what i wrote so far:

the long term causes happened over a period of time. as i will now discuss them.

is that ok ?
December - don't copy ma introduction !!! loll i go to greenford high school in west london !
 
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