HI, is this poem.... any good? JW... please answer!!!?

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The morning sunlight

Awakening ever so slowly peeking out at the shimmering golds of the morning sun

A blue jay swoops past my window swiflty but I still get a chance to gaze at his beautiful wings

I think aloud by saying why is it that this beauty is only seen by those who can stop and stare

Te people rushing never get to see
the beauty this place has bestowed upon me.

I think some people have fully forgotten what it is like to be a child

They have stopped trying to chase thier dreams

I am still running after mine

The morning sun has made me feel so special

People have forgotten when your a kid that you can stop and listen and feel peaceful

that is why I even so old as 15 I am still trying to see the true beauty of this world and never let go of my childhood when I could just lay and watch the clouds... because I used to have the gift... the gift of time
I am not 15.
 
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