please read this and suggest/correct my letter.many Thanks for reading 
Regarding a career opportunity in Yes fm
Dear Sir/Madem
My name is xxxxx.I'm 20 years old.I'm currently a student of National Insitute of Business Management xxxxx
I'm studying for a Diploma in Computer System Designing.I am a huge fan of Yes fm since i was a child,and my dream was to be a part of the crew.
I can speak english fluently and have a perfect accent.I've been a very active memeber of my college's Media Unit,presentating and
promoting in many fucnctions.I have represented my college in many competitions.Also i have hosted live radio
several times on our college's own radio frequency Dfm (96.1) in it's last two seasons.
I really hope you will kindly concern this letter and hire me to the crew and let my passion and skills in radio presenting make Yes fm proud.
Thank You
Your sincere
xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Regarding a career opportunity in Yes fm
Dear Sir/Madem
My name is xxxxx.I'm 20 years old.I'm currently a student of National Insitute of Business Management xxxxx
I'm studying for a Diploma in Computer System Designing.I am a huge fan of Yes fm since i was a child,and my dream was to be a part of the crew.
I can speak english fluently and have a perfect accent.I've been a very active memeber of my college's Media Unit,presentating and
promoting in many fucnctions.I have represented my college in many competitions.Also i have hosted live radio
several times on our college's own radio frequency Dfm (96.1) in it's last two seasons.
I really hope you will kindly concern this letter and hire me to the crew and let my passion and skills in radio presenting make Yes fm proud.
Thank You
Your sincere
xxxxxxxxxxxxx