here's my poem what do you think?

[just another girl]

Just make sure a stupid ***** doesn't think it's about her dead uncle/dad I didn't write for that person you idiot *****. This is for a person who is still alive and well, from reading it they would know it was for them you asshole.
pass it along I guess
I gave you all my love
because I thought you were true
but now I know you were a fake
and broke my heart in two
so here's goodbye
and to you I say I hate that I love you
I hope you understand
my hopes and likes just were emotions that I feel
and now I know they can never be real
but it would be nice
for just a day or maybe a night
everything would be right
and you will tell me you like me
no, you always loved me
and you would say the words I could never say
and the skies
there will be a plane that announce our names
but in a world of cruel and meanest
I can never be with you and that is what makes me sad
sometimes I wonder if it's true
that all of this was because I was victim too
and maybe I am broken
but you were the key to fix me
though now I hate that I love you
and I just wanted you to know I'm still alive since you
keep saying you were part of my past.