Madi Larsony
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Im writing a story and ive gotten to a part where im having trouble with. So my main character, Kaylee ( 17 years old), gets shot in the chest in a convenient store in front of her brother, Andy (25 years old). How would the Andy react. He loves his sister. And how would the sister feel?How would she react? How would I describe the scene? And I don't want to make this cheesy at all. I really need some help help with this!