answer! Please this is due tomorrow!? So I wrote a book review on the book "The Killer Angels" by Michael Sharra. It's about Gettysburg. And I'm working on my conclusion and what i have is ok but not great.
This is a fantastic book: unique in that it is historically accurate, while telling a non-partisan story from multiple viewpoints of different military leaders. I highly suggest The Killer Angels to everybody, not only Civil War fans. It is history come to life; as compelling as any novel; all the more amazing for its insight into one of the most pivotal events in American history.
Can you guys please give me feedback.
Also, if anybody was willing to help me clean up some of the colons and semi-colons that would be great! I can't think of a way to do it. Also, I have to use the word "I" as little as possible.
Finally, I want to say how this affected me in conclusion. It really made me realize that these soldiers were brave people and it really made me stop and think about how if Gettysburg hadn't happened our lives would be completely different right now. But I can't find a good way to phrase it or incorperate it into my conclusion.
I'm a Freshman.
This is a fantastic book: unique in that it is historically accurate, while telling a non-partisan story from multiple viewpoints of different military leaders. I highly suggest The Killer Angels to everybody, not only Civil War fans. It is history come to life; as compelling as any novel; all the more amazing for its insight into one of the most pivotal events in American history.
Can you guys please give me feedback.
Also, if anybody was willing to help me clean up some of the colons and semi-colons that would be great! I can't think of a way to do it. Also, I have to use the word "I" as little as possible.
Finally, I want to say how this affected me in conclusion. It really made me realize that these soldiers were brave people and it really made me stop and think about how if Gettysburg hadn't happened our lives would be completely different right now. But I can't find a good way to phrase it or incorperate it into my conclusion.
I'm a Freshman.