help with this poem:)... PLEASE?!?

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can anyone fill in these blanks?

confusion is the colour _____ ______
confusion smells like ______ ________
confusion tastes like ______ ________
confusion looks like ________ _______
confusion feels like ________ ________
confusion sounds like ______ ________

please try and make it deep. even if you have an idea for just one of the sentance, that would be totally cool:) THANKYOU:D
 
confusion swirls like a cloud of color
grey blue green brown orange
red yellow purple
black
on my tongue I begin to taste it
for a moment
sweet
bitter
sour
moments flashing in my mind
stored like photographs
can be recalled
in an instant
but I can not
remember
what I want
to touch
with skin so cold
like needles prickly
hard as wood
touching
my fingers
with a whirlwind of noise
harsh
hard
shrill
whirling
and
fal
li
n
g
 
Deep huh? *lol*
OK, I'll give you angst and despair and no-way-out. (Serve you right). Hang on tight.

Confusion is the colour of the car you left in.
Beige, tan, rust and gone.
Confusion smells like the waft of perfume that remained.
I opened all the windows. I wanted to break them.
Confusion tastes like these salt tears.
Now I simply cannot see where there is to get to.
Confusion looks like this last photograph you left me.
I dare not break the glass, although it's screaming to me.
Confusion feels like all this empty space.
Confusion sounds like nothing. Nothing at all.
 
Deep huh? *lol*
OK, I'll give you angst and despair and no-way-out. (Serve you right). Hang on tight.

Confusion is the colour of the car you left in.
Beige, tan, rust and gone.
Confusion smells like the waft of perfume that remained.
I opened all the windows. I wanted to break them.
Confusion tastes like these salt tears.
Now I simply cannot see where there is to get to.
Confusion looks like this last photograph you left me.
I dare not break the glass, although it's screaming to me.
Confusion feels like all this empty space.
Confusion sounds like nothing. Nothing at all.
 
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