Help with this 'headline' sort of sentence, I need new words to add/replace, its so

lilly

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short, help with revision? Ok so this is a headline sort of thing. Ok so the dolls/jewelry etc....they're MAGICAL =) They will be bringing good luck/fortune to the new owner who wishes to purchase a piece (the luck part is explained in another section). What I know with the articles: dolls/jewels/etc is that people are going to want them (in the storyline) however, I want to make it sound like the dolls and jewelry are seeking/wanting THEM....I want it to sound like ..its 'meant' for them or something. As if the jewelry is almost alive, sort of a feel.


Spellcast; Dolls, Jewels, and Memorabilia ~ anticipate your presence and arrival, for they wish to captivate your presence



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