can u check this sonnet that i wrote and can u check if the stress marks and the feet are right thanks!!
The su'm/mer s'un is bo'il/ing on'/ my fa'ce
As 'i/ drink co'ol/ refres'h/ing le'm/onade
I sta're/ in'to / a pi'le of emp'/ty spa'ce
Curf'ues / and cho'res / are b'eing / diso'beyed
My br'o/ ther w'as / swim'ming / at 'a /great p'ace
he ma'kes /a s'mall /cur'ly/ round s'ky/ blue wa'ves
i h'ear/ mom pa'ck/ing h'er / bright r'ed / suit'case
i im'a/ gine m'y / sweet b'ro / ther in' / a c'ave
un'der/ a t'ree/ i l'ie / picki'ng / clov'ers
play'ing /the w'ii /and t'hen /i pl'ay /ping p'ong
thin'king / that s'um /mer i's /nea'rly /ov'er
the a'n/noying b'ell / lou'dly / rings d'ing dong
in su'm/ merti'me / you h'ave/ lots o'f / spare ti'me
for shop'/ ping a'nd / spen'ding/ more t'han/ a d'ime
can u tell me if everythings right pls thanks!
The su'm/mer s'un is bo'il/ing on'/ my fa'ce
As 'i/ drink co'ol/ refres'h/ing le'm/onade
I sta're/ in'to / a pi'le of emp'/ty spa'ce
Curf'ues / and cho'res / are b'eing / diso'beyed
My br'o/ ther w'as / swim'ming / at 'a /great p'ace
he ma'kes /a s'mall /cur'ly/ round s'ky/ blue wa'ves
i h'ear/ mom pa'ck/ing h'er / bright r'ed / suit'case
i im'a/ gine m'y / sweet b'ro / ther in' / a c'ave
un'der/ a t'ree/ i l'ie / picki'ng / clov'ers
play'ing /the w'ii /and t'hen /i pl'ay /ping p'ong
thin'king / that s'um /mer i's /nea'rly /ov'er
the a'n/noying b'ell / lou'dly / rings d'ing dong
in su'm/ merti'me / you h'ave/ lots o'f / spare ti'me
for shop'/ ping a'nd / spen'ding/ more t'han/ a d'ime
can u tell me if everythings right pls thanks!