Help with Poetry!! Need some ideas!!!!?

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Ok, im doing a poem on My favorite place and you have to describe what it is like and so i chose outerspace as my favorite place. So far this is what i got,

Gazing up though the sky
Above the heavens up so high
Standing from down under
I stare and wonder

Can anyone give me some ideas on how i could continue this. It has to be a maximum of 25 lines and is due tomorrow!!! PLEASE HELP!!!!!!
 
deep blue madness
so complex in its eternality
i gaze in awe
wondering just how small
i must appear to the gods
space is just a small definition
of the enormity of this place
it goes forever
almost like my wonder of this place
goes forever
outer space
as oppose to inner space?
i feel disgraced to be
just a small part of this universe
and yet...
so privileged...
and i finally realize
just how simple the answer
really is
here i know
as i gaze
outer space
must be the place
i end my journey
of this eternal conundrum
know only as life




there's mine!
good luck, and poems dont have to rhyme FYI
 
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