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so far i have...
....various health problems are associated with the process of achieving this "perfect" self image and many people are willing to go to extreme measures to obtain it. today, thin is in, and this has caused a high increase on eating disorders per decade...
what can i add to it to make it stronger, or bring in my opinion? or is there anything i should change in what i have so far.. i have a little intro before thats why there is ..., and same with the end ..., but its not really part of my thesis statement anymore. thanks!
....various health problems are associated with the process of achieving this "perfect" self image and many people are willing to go to extreme measures to obtain it. today, thin is in, and this has caused a high increase on eating disorders per decade...
what can i add to it to make it stronger, or bring in my opinion? or is there anything i should change in what i have so far.. i have a little intro before thats why there is ..., and same with the end ..., but its not really part of my thesis statement anymore. thanks!