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Okay, I have this idea for a song, but I just don’t know how to put it in lyrics and on paper. It doesn’t have to be worded this way, but:
It’s about a guy and a girl. It starts off when they’re in Elementary. The girl isn’t so pretty in Elementary and the guy makes fun of her a lot. He tears down her emotional confidence and causes her to become very insecure, though she fights it off from time to time, she can’t help but feel a feeling of tenseness when being around the other girls. The boy continues to make fun of her and put her down throughout there school years. The girl was fat and short with nappy hair. She wore braces and had glasses. The boy was a pretty charming guy in the eyes of most girls who he went to school with. He was tall, muscular, and had a nice sense of humor. Well, I kind of want the storyline of the song to end with the boy and girl in their senior year of high school. Somehow, the boy and girl transferred to the same exact schools throughout all there years, but as they got older, never really communicated much. These last few things take place before the ending of the song. The girl who was short and fat slimmed out to just the perfect weight and ended up being 5’3”. Her childhood weight made her nice and thick. Her teeth were perfect and straight because of her braces, she wore contacts and her hair was styled nicely so that it looked very pretty. All the boys liked her now.
The boy who was muscular and tall didn’t grow much more after middle school. He ended up being very short. His head kept growing though until it became too big for his body. (He was big headed) His voice became annoying (He talked too much) “His words were like lethal weapons, all the smack he talked. His noise was pointy from telling fibs. His jokes became stale like a bag of chips.” (I don’t know about those lines, but you get the point. Something like that) I want it to be metaphoric, so this actual storyline I just depicted shouldn't really be explained in the song.
It is just an idea, but I don’t want it to go to waste. I take my work very seriously. It’s a rap song, by the way. I don’t like to talk about girls all the time, being hard or having money that I don’t have in my songs. I want to have meanings like this. The meaning of the song is that, you never know how things will change around; even if they change at the last second.
First, tell me if you like my idea. Second help me out and maybe even give me some lyrics if you can. Thanx!!
It’s about a guy and a girl. It starts off when they’re in Elementary. The girl isn’t so pretty in Elementary and the guy makes fun of her a lot. He tears down her emotional confidence and causes her to become very insecure, though she fights it off from time to time, she can’t help but feel a feeling of tenseness when being around the other girls. The boy continues to make fun of her and put her down throughout there school years. The girl was fat and short with nappy hair. She wore braces and had glasses. The boy was a pretty charming guy in the eyes of most girls who he went to school with. He was tall, muscular, and had a nice sense of humor. Well, I kind of want the storyline of the song to end with the boy and girl in their senior year of high school. Somehow, the boy and girl transferred to the same exact schools throughout all there years, but as they got older, never really communicated much. These last few things take place before the ending of the song. The girl who was short and fat slimmed out to just the perfect weight and ended up being 5’3”. Her childhood weight made her nice and thick. Her teeth were perfect and straight because of her braces, she wore contacts and her hair was styled nicely so that it looked very pretty. All the boys liked her now.
The boy who was muscular and tall didn’t grow much more after middle school. He ended up being very short. His head kept growing though until it became too big for his body. (He was big headed) His voice became annoying (He talked too much) “His words were like lethal weapons, all the smack he talked. His noise was pointy from telling fibs. His jokes became stale like a bag of chips.” (I don’t know about those lines, but you get the point. Something like that) I want it to be metaphoric, so this actual storyline I just depicted shouldn't really be explained in the song.
It is just an idea, but I don’t want it to go to waste. I take my work very seriously. It’s a rap song, by the way. I don’t like to talk about girls all the time, being hard or having money that I don’t have in my songs. I want to have meanings like this. The meaning of the song is that, you never know how things will change around; even if they change at the last second.
First, tell me if you like my idea. Second help me out and maybe even give me some lyrics if you can. Thanx!!