help with my poem please!!!?

mankind9965

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im writing a limerick and i need help please....

there was an old lady who lived in berlin
she went to the church to confess a sin
the priest was shocked
the lady was taken to a room in which she was locked????
the poor old lady who lived in berlin

Is This Okay?
im not too sure about the two middle lines Any Help?
thnx in advance!
 
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