We have to make a sonnet for English (Shakespearean form)
is this sonnet okay? does it nee revising? and does it make sense at all??
The moment you shut your eyes forever
Separation from everything in life
Death being the fear that you couldn't conquer
The final moment you meet deaths scythe
No breath left inside your empty carcass
Being in an empty world of nothing
Now sleeping forever under the grass
Your last day on earth and your last spring
Now enjoying your moments in heaven
Death was nothing to fear from the start
For this place I'm now in is a given
A place that only exists in the heart
Heaven is beautiful, serene, and calm
To fear the act of death would just be wrong.
Its my first one and i dont know what to think of it!
is this sonnet okay? does it nee revising? and does it make sense at all??
The moment you shut your eyes forever
Separation from everything in life
Death being the fear that you couldn't conquer
The final moment you meet deaths scythe
No breath left inside your empty carcass
Being in an empty world of nothing
Now sleeping forever under the grass
Your last day on earth and your last spring
Now enjoying your moments in heaven
Death was nothing to fear from the start
For this place I'm now in is a given
A place that only exists in the heart
Heaven is beautiful, serene, and calm
To fear the act of death would just be wrong.
Its my first one and i dont know what to think of it!