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Sarah Corda

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Pointe shoes

After dedicating hours to finding the best pair
I become obsessed
I adore your pristine, pink perfection
The way you begin; soft, shiny, satin
Arriving at class
Tying the ribbons right
Into criss-crosses

Pointe shoes

Strolling onto the dance floor
How I love the sound you make
The box hits the wood and strikes
You hold me up right from my toes
Without you, I would be nothing

Pointe shoes

Breaking in takes weeks, even months
But you are worthy of my time
Although at this point you are old and tattered
Elephant skin, in a dull pink
 
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