Help with a thesis statement for sociology paper?

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I'm having trouble forming my ideas into a thesis statement. My topic is Women, Femininity and Sport. The "thesis statement" that I've come up with is that "Female athletes are not taken seriously because of society’s biases and ineffective media portrayal".
Is this a good thesis statement, and if it is, can you give me suggestions on how to make it stronger?
 
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