Help With A Poetry Assignment (Just read this short poem)?

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Okay, I have this poetry project for English. My poem's below. We have to read it to the class and tell them the meaning. I think I get the basic meaning, but the last line throws it all off. I have no idea what the last line means! We also have to find two examples of poetic terms. I think the 2nd line is an example of figurative language, but I'm not sure. And is the line "It is a real chill out" an example of refrain? Thank you guys so much for all them help!

Here's the poem:

A Sunset of the City


Already I am no longer looked at with lechery or love.
My daughters and sons have put me away with marbles and dolls,
Are gone from the house.
My husband and lovers are pleasant or somewhat polite
And night is night.

It is a real chill out,
The genuine thing.
I am not deceived, I do not think it is still summer
Because sun stays and birds continue to sing.

It is summer-gone that I see, it is summer-gone.
The sweet flowers indrying and dying down,
The grasses forgetting their blaze and consenting to brown.

It is a real chill out. The fall crisp comes
I am aware there is winter to heed.
There is no warm house
That is fitted with my need.

I am cold in this cold house this house
Whose washed echoes are tremulous down lost halls.
I am a woman, and dusty, standing among new affairs.
I am a woman who hurries through her prayers.

Tin intimations of a quiet core to be my
Desert and my dear relief
Come: there shall be such islanding from grief,
And small communion with the master shore.
Twang they. And I incline this ear to tin,
Consult a dual dilemma. Whether to dry
In humming pallor or to leap and die.

Somebody muffed it?? Somebody wanted to joke.
 
Some poetic devices:

Consonance: L1 longer looked lechery love
Repetition: L2S2 summer-gone L1S5 cold house, etc. (lots more)
Imagery: washed echoes, consenting to brown, put me away with marbles and dolls (plus more)

I think the ending can be interpreted as either: 'what the heck, its life, deal with it' or literally someone contemplated it but only in jest as seeing the irony in life.
 
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