Ok this is my intro:
Kit paused to stop writing as she failed her attempt to fight back her tears, a single bead of water streamed from her sapphire eyes and fell upon the white paper in front of her, staining it.
Her hands where shaking vigorously when she could bring herself to continue writing 'be brave Kit!' She reassured herself as she felt two comforting hands squeeze her shoulders lovingly from behind her, looking up to find her husband.
''He will be a here soon,'' he whispered hoarsely, Kit only nodded, too speechless as she hurried to finish the letter. Once it was done, she scanned it accurately leaning back in her chair, wiping at her dried tear.
''Kids!'' Kit called loudly, a moment later two identical twins appeared at the arched doorway, they had the same features as each other; fragile light tanned skin, dark hair, deep marine blue eyes.
''Mother'' they replied exchanging a puzzled expression, Kit cleared her throat forcing on a fake smile at her two children before folding the finished letter, sealing it with a tender kiss and handing it to them.
''Listen to me closely, children,'' she prepared herself with a deep breath before continuing, ''You'r father and I are going somwhere. Odds are, we may never come back. You'l be staying for quite a while with you'r uncle, Vincent.'' Her voice lowered at the last few words as she found herself mumbeling to herself.
The twins exchanged yet another look of be wilderness as they brought their selves forwards.
''Why? We don't even know any of our uncles named Vincent,'' Indigo spoke softly, her twin brother; Elton, couldn't help nodding in agreement.
''Besides, we don't want to leave you, we'r happy here!'' Elton confirmed meeting his father's tender eyes, Edgar shook his head frowning at his children.
''Everything will be explained in this letter,'' he then ruffled up his sleeve glancing at his watch, ''We'r very sorry. But we have to leave now. Come on honey I'll meet you in the car.'' He delivered a sorrowful look across at the twins as he got up and walked towards the door, pausing to take a last look at his children before vanishing into the mist.
The twins read determination and the pain the decision has caused upon their parents.
''We will see each other again, I promise'' Kit finished while caressing her children's faces. Indigo squeezed the letter close to her chest and closed her eyes.
''We love you mother,'' the children whispered weakly.
''I love you, too!'' Kit replied embracing the children as to her frustration more tears uncontrollably escaped her eyes, streaming down heavily. Without another word she got up, tucked her chair in and left, disappearing into the mist and facing her destiny.
Its about twins who find out when they stay with their unlce who is very rude to them and careless, he makes them do all the house work, and he hates children e.t.c he has planned to steal the enormous fortune their parents have, so he forces their parents away and plans to kill them secretely so that the money will be claimed to him!
The twins find out his plan and when their aunt Felicity comes to visit she overhears their conversations when the twins bravely argue to their uncle and he says ''you can't stop me your just little kids'' and she comes in and they report him to the authorities whilst the twins move to their aunt's house and other things begin to happen.... There is more to it than that but I just thought you might want to know so you get a feel of my storyline so far for the blurb.
It's very similar to my other book I have published called ''the series of unfortunate events''
Kit paused to stop writing as she failed her attempt to fight back her tears, a single bead of water streamed from her sapphire eyes and fell upon the white paper in front of her, staining it.
Her hands where shaking vigorously when she could bring herself to continue writing 'be brave Kit!' She reassured herself as she felt two comforting hands squeeze her shoulders lovingly from behind her, looking up to find her husband.
''He will be a here soon,'' he whispered hoarsely, Kit only nodded, too speechless as she hurried to finish the letter. Once it was done, she scanned it accurately leaning back in her chair, wiping at her dried tear.
''Kids!'' Kit called loudly, a moment later two identical twins appeared at the arched doorway, they had the same features as each other; fragile light tanned skin, dark hair, deep marine blue eyes.
''Mother'' they replied exchanging a puzzled expression, Kit cleared her throat forcing on a fake smile at her two children before folding the finished letter, sealing it with a tender kiss and handing it to them.
''Listen to me closely, children,'' she prepared herself with a deep breath before continuing, ''You'r father and I are going somwhere. Odds are, we may never come back. You'l be staying for quite a while with you'r uncle, Vincent.'' Her voice lowered at the last few words as she found herself mumbeling to herself.
The twins exchanged yet another look of be wilderness as they brought their selves forwards.
''Why? We don't even know any of our uncles named Vincent,'' Indigo spoke softly, her twin brother; Elton, couldn't help nodding in agreement.
''Besides, we don't want to leave you, we'r happy here!'' Elton confirmed meeting his father's tender eyes, Edgar shook his head frowning at his children.
''Everything will be explained in this letter,'' he then ruffled up his sleeve glancing at his watch, ''We'r very sorry. But we have to leave now. Come on honey I'll meet you in the car.'' He delivered a sorrowful look across at the twins as he got up and walked towards the door, pausing to take a last look at his children before vanishing into the mist.
The twins read determination and the pain the decision has caused upon their parents.
''We will see each other again, I promise'' Kit finished while caressing her children's faces. Indigo squeezed the letter close to her chest and closed her eyes.
''We love you mother,'' the children whispered weakly.
''I love you, too!'' Kit replied embracing the children as to her frustration more tears uncontrollably escaped her eyes, streaming down heavily. Without another word she got up, tucked her chair in and left, disappearing into the mist and facing her destiny.
Its about twins who find out when they stay with their unlce who is very rude to them and careless, he makes them do all the house work, and he hates children e.t.c he has planned to steal the enormous fortune their parents have, so he forces their parents away and plans to kill them secretely so that the money will be claimed to him!
The twins find out his plan and when their aunt Felicity comes to visit she overhears their conversations when the twins bravely argue to their uncle and he says ''you can't stop me your just little kids'' and she comes in and they report him to the authorities whilst the twins move to their aunt's house and other things begin to happen.... There is more to it than that but I just thought you might want to know so you get a feel of my storyline so far for the blurb.
It's very similar to my other book I have published called ''the series of unfortunate events''