Help on persuasive text based on army? PLEASE?

Titzj Tandoori

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so far ive written

Are you brave enough to join the army?

Joining the army is not only about fighting for your country,it is also about exploring the world and its beautiful nature.This is an one in a life time opportunity so think wisely because you could be here,in the army,helping the unfortunate...

what next? PLEASE HELP ME
 
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