Rebecca Yea
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So my teacher checked my poem nd it needs some fixing!
1. How do i show "remembering the past"? I wrote that line nd he said II must show it. How do i do that????
2. I used "its a older person seeing the light at the end of a lonely road" nd he said "the light at the end of a loney road" corny nd cliche... So i need to change it! Someone help pl.ease! I hv no idea what to change it to :-(. Can someone help md please i hv no idea what or how to change it.
3. Also how can I describe soldiers in war??? Any idea??
Ps. Sorry for the bad grammer. Im using my phone nd its a bit crazy
1. How do i show "remembering the past"? I wrote that line nd he said II must show it. How do i do that????
2. I used "its a older person seeing the light at the end of a lonely road" nd he said "the light at the end of a loney road" corny nd cliche... So i need to change it! Someone help pl.ease! I hv no idea what to change it to :-(. Can someone help md please i hv no idea what or how to change it.
3. Also how can I describe soldiers in war??? Any idea??
Ps. Sorry for the bad grammer. Im using my phone nd its a bit crazy