Help on a poem? Any good poets out there?

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K, could you check my poem, then give me some idea for maybe 2-3 more stanzas. This poem is for my friend Jessica who's birthday is today!

Jess, It's your birthday
Your very happy day
So make a wish, it's comin' true
Cuz I'm sending stars your way

Whenever I get on Facebook :-)
Sad and feeling down
I always get off feeling better
Cuz you're my laugh-o-lots, my clown....
 
Jess its your birthday
Wishes coming true
I'm sending stars your way
For today is just for you

Candels and cakes
Presents and fun
All for your sake
Until the day is done

When I'm feeling down
And then we chat
You make a smile out of my frown
You're just good like that

So I'm making a poem
Rhymes just for you
That your wishes are going
To always come true
 
You are never know why you are here
But I know, U are here
Because we are here need u a lot
You are our dearest person
You give a new color to my life
Forever and ever
Let us celebrate your day together
Next and the next after the next year
Hope the best for u ever...
Happy Birthday ^ ^
 
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