Sara Lodge
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You see, the first chapter of my story will start by a postman calling out, delivering a letter. Do you think this is how they called out? here:
“Letter for Sir Thomas! Letter for Sir Thomas! Letter from the King!” Peter, the messenger boy called out.
Is that fine? I don't want the first sentence of my story to be ruined, therefore I'd like to ask you of your opinion.
Thanks a bunch!!
-Sarah
“Letter for Sir Thomas! Letter for Sir Thomas! Letter from the King!” Peter, the messenger boy called out.
Is that fine? I don't want the first sentence of my story to be ruined, therefore I'd like to ask you of your opinion.
Thanks a bunch!!
-Sarah