1. I am constructing skills,
Higher and higher
Until the time it is so high
That it must be stopped.
I have far more to go
And may face some troubles
But I will work even harder
To continue my tasks.
2. People stand before the long stairs
That stretch far into somewhere
The people who always rush through it all,
Always are the ones who will fall,
Every step and every stair,
Should always be taken with care,
Because maybe if you fall next time,
You won't be able to make the climb.
What do you think about my two poems??
also, can someone write me a better and longer version??
i have to share this in front of my friends' families,,,,
Higher and higher
Until the time it is so high
That it must be stopped.
I have far more to go
And may face some troubles
But I will work even harder
To continue my tasks.
2. People stand before the long stairs
That stretch far into somewhere
The people who always rush through it all,
Always are the ones who will fall,
Every step and every stair,
Should always be taken with care,
Because maybe if you fall next time,
You won't be able to make the climb.
What do you think about my two poems??
also, can someone write me a better and longer version??
i have to share this in front of my friends' families,,,,