Help me write a love poem please !!?

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Conor B

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Ok. I love this girl. we are goin out. can someone please help me write a love poem.. i remember me and her holding in the rain kissing. and holding eachother. saying how we love eachother.+). she is precious. beautiful body. brown hair with gorgeous blonde streeks. she is spectacular. i show my feelings so much. but if someone can please Please write me a love poem that i can give to her. not Very strong words. but sweet, cute and sensual. i dont want it to look like, a professional did it. but like a kid. thank you so much if you can please help. i will just change a few things to make it so i helped write it. thank you =)!. her name is adrienna
 
1.) Love poems are supposed to come from you, and from the heart. Having other people write it for you completely destroys the entire POINT of writing one in the first place.

2.) EVERY SINGLE THING you just described about this girl is a physical attribute. You have said nothing about who she actually is. You are in lust, not in love.
 
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