HELP ME WITH THE BEAR INSIDE any opinions?

captn

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Here is something for you to think its not a poem its on the brink I wont stop rhyming but listen well for here we go and I shall tell....

The bear inside.


The bear inside he waits he prowls he cannot hide but always yowls
We know he’s there but look away for we don’t dare our eyes don’t stray
We walk up to the gate of black and when we’re through we can’t go back
But hence were trapped within his jaws until we’ve snapped our broken laws.
You know it’s off but cryptic’s true the way I scoff at you not you.
I speak of bears of caves and men of dares and glares and things of ten.
Some might mean and some might not but bears aren’t green and so you’re caught.
Believe this mad this limerick rush, don’t get sad just read and blush
For you read so fast and catch on slow, but bears don’t last, so downs our foe.
I leave you now with song my dear, do not belong.... and shed a tear.

now my readers I do ask sing song in a flask, put opinions into words but please my people please no terds. I beg I beg bad or worse write your words please don't think please write first.
so here's the truth yes up there ^^^ I bid you NOW, think if dared. NOW what have you to say right now about this brink this poem this vow....?
 
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